The envornment we are live in is in danger due to various problems. So what do you think should be responsible for solving it.Is the government,
organizations or individuals.
No one can overlay the fact that the planet we live in is at serious threat. Increasing number of natural calamities like Tsunami, earthquakes, floods and hurricanes have given us repeated warning signals. Government, corporates and individuals must work together to fight this by fostering organic lifestyle. This essay will outline causes, responsibilities, and solution of the issue.
Our environment has been seriously afflicted because of two main reasons. Firstly, rapid industrialization has led to massive deforestation. Secondly, urbanisation of rural areas to support industries has augmented CO2 emission. Due to these issues our planet has witnessed serious natural disasters that never existed before.
It is everyone’s responsibility as some day or the other everyone will have to face the pangs of our own deeds. Since the government has the most power to design policies that will restrict such deforestation and industrialisation, they should take the responsibility to fight this issue.
Since we are all in this mess together, we have to take collective steps in order to curtail global warming. Authorities should make strict laws against environment polluters. Companies should move towards producing recyclable and eco-friendly products. As an individual, we have the power to make a conscious choice towards organic lifestyle, we must excel is all possible opitions In a nutshell, we have created this problem and we are responsible for it together. So only collective measures towards living in harmony with nature will solve our problems. Thus, it is necessary for individuals, corporates, and lawmakers to work hand in hand to combat this problem.ns.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 257.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55642023346 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29128602566 2.71678728327 121% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645914396887 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 70.642558658 50.4703680194 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.25 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0625 20.9669160288 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3125 7.25397266985 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175741217464 0.242375264174 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463035855591 0.0925447433944 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442815571648 0.071462118173 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0841184429223 0.151781067708 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657061014567 0.0609392437508 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.1260098522 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 55.0591133005 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.5 Out of 90
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