Detention of resembling the animals are extremely brutal in nature with existence of zoos in present world is of no consequence. I somehow agree with the statement as animals are being kept for demonstration as well as for their violent manner while the freedom is also needed for the convenience of the animals.
Animal occupies significant proportion of living beings in the world but sense of conservation and other motives has dampen their rights which signals negativity. Numerous national parks and conservation areas are opened in order to preserve wild animals for impeccable sense of freedom as meals, water and mates are found in abundance, so, incarceration of animals doesn't creates positivity for their keenness. Certain boundaries certainly induces detainment of their harmful behavior, Although confinement might have few pros, the rights are equal if doing comparison with human beings and the way those vulnerable species are tortured in the zoos this is absolutely paramount. For example, more than 90% animals resides on the protected. That may means majority of faunas are not kept on zoo or other confine area. Hence animals should not be placed at zoo and their level of freedom are uncompromising.
As far as faunas keeping in the zoo are concerned, public show of animals can reveal which helps in people understanding of animal characters and physical appearances.What if a particular animal attacks or showed an unusual behavior? For leveling off those unwanted effects zoos might be righteous and exemplary. Thirdly, food are served at considerable amount and time which they could have struggle to find on forests. To illustrate, Each day heavy meals for lions delivered at all day long at national zoo of Nepal. Therefore, For educational or visual purposes it also find out monumental reasons and makes sense.
Conclusively, animals have own way of living habitats and inducement of zoos may surround uncertainties and health wise also it's mot applicable so forests are the only place to cope better for these habitats. Moreover, government should also take initiatives on the matter and act as a framework to ponder upon for conservationist and to zoo keeper or staffs. At the end, trap of animals consider to be serious crime and violation will definitely embarks penalise acts.
- Many people reckons that severe punishment needs to be conduct for traffic violation. I completely agree with the statement as the person who is guilty is certainly penalized hardly. 56
- The graph reveals about average month by month temperature level with average time of sunny day for twelve months in cities such as London, New York and Sydney. 73
- Detention of resembling the animals are extremely brutal in nature with existence of zoos in present world is of no consequence. I somehow agree with the statement as animals are being kept for demonstration as well as for their violent manner while the f 56
- Several nations are eager to host global sporting event ,whereas other countries tend to believe it causes more problems than benefits.I reckon, organizing any international sport event brings tremendous opportunities to concern nations ,meanwhile it has 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: dampened
...e of conservation and other motives has dampen their rights which signals negativity. ...
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Suggestion: doesn't
...abundance, so, incarceration of animals doesnt creates positivity for their keenness. ...
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Suggestion: Hence,
... not kept on zoo or other confine area. Hence animals should not be placed at zoo and...
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Suggestion: What
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Suggestion: attack
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Suggestion: embark
...ous crime and violation will definitely embarks penalise acts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, third, thirdly, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28526645768 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92242041324 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.966828644 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.428571429 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7857142857 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276708376164 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930140141257 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423361897543 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182235472012 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549761701249 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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