Education is not a luxury, but a basic human right and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth.
Do you agree or disagree?
Knowledge is necessary and priceless for an individual. It should not be considered as an extravagance, but a basic need for humans and must be free of cost for everyone. In my opinion, I completely agree as without education, the nation cannot grow for a longer time.
Firstly, poverty levels are high in uneducated world, thus impacting the economy of country adversely. Lack of knowledge prevent the individual from job sector and persuade him to do unskilled work, therefore the country cannot have skilled people such as scientists, doctors and businessmen, to ensure the smooth operation of different sectors. Hence, the government needs to pursue skilled people from other nations to fulfil the needs of society. In overall the economy of the nation is affected. For instance, Nigeria is one of the poorest countries and its literacy rate is only 9 percent.
Another vital factor is the independence and boosting the confidence via education. An educated youth can work in any part of the world with their knowledge and skilled levels. In addition to that, educated people are more aware of the human rights as compare with illiterate youth. In recent study conducted by education department in India, has shown that 99 percent of educated youth are earning enough to feed the family of 4 individuals.
In conclusion, the education is a basic right for the people to become competent and skilled in this world to feed their family as well as to boost the economy of nation. Hence, I believe that education should be free of any charge for every individual.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98854961832 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74941920858 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583969465649 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2430601967 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3571428571 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1428571429 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235109774887 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754259708312 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836824938509 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152671715211 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0860745326993 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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