Some people work for same organisation all their working life while other think that it is better for work in different organisation .Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is irrefutable that works plays a crucial role in the life of people to fulfill their needs .some people opine that working for one organisation throughout the life is best because others believe that by doing job in different companies are good .This essay shall delve with both the view-point along with my opinion in later paragraphs along with some examples .
on the one hand,the supporters of farmer notion claim that working in one field for a whole life is better.Infact,it is not only essential to get experience but also for the betterment of life .As a consequences ,it further lead to get promotion as well as good salary pakages.To epitomise ,if any person dedicate their life towards one field ,it results in getting better future .Another reason is that it is fruitful to become perfect in one field .Owing to which,they get more respect from their collegues.
however,the advocates of latter fact claim that variation in the working field is important.As a matter of it,change is a law of nature as it plays a pivotal role to get knowledge about different culture and work.For instance ,by doing job in different areas ,person is able to acquire information about different culture and moral values by meeting kinds of people.
To sum up ,although both views are worth consideration ,yet from my opinion ,by altering a jobs may mendantary to visit different places ,which ought to enhance skills and values...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, well, for instance, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02083333333 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75887120534 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604166666667 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 60.0 20.2975951904 296% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 116.534329706 49.4020404114 236% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 301.25 106.682146367 282% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 60.0 20.7667163134 289% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.5 7.06120827912 262% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 5.01903807615 697% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319488524651 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175645607078 0.084324248473 208% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0960886273414 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175645607078 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0960886273414 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.2 13.0946893788 246% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 10.58 50.2224549098 21% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.7 11.3001002004 236% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.76 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.0 10.1190380762 257% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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