Write a letter to the hotel for making the arrangement. Let them know:
when you will be arriving and leaving
what type of rooms you would like and ask how much the weekend will cost
inquire about activities and places of interest near the hotel
Dear sir/madam,
I am Harry and writing this letter for inquiring and booking a double bedroom in your esteemed hotel. I got to know about your hotel through one of my dear friend who is a frequent visitor and probably a star member too.
I have booked a flight which is scheduled to reach there at 11 pm on Thursday (5th June). Probably I will be able to check-in by 11:30 pm same night as I verified on GPS that your hotel is not that far from the airport. I am planning to stay in the hotel for 3 days which includes the weekend too, as there are some conference meeting I have to attend.
Also I would like to mention if there is a possibility of getting a corner room with an attached balcony, I would prefer that. Along with aforementioned, if the room has an attached Laundromat that would be greatly appreciated. As I was a little confused about the charges of room when compared to weekday and weekend. Hence it would be very generous of you, if you let me know the total amount I have to pay along with the required bifurcation.
If you can guide me with any additional facility which your hotel provides, I would definitely like to run through them.
Lastly, as I would be visiting the city for the first time, it would be really helpful if you could suggest some nearby places to visit and some decent restaurants.
For any further comments or questions you can contact me at 111-111-1111. Thank you in advance for taking time and arranging all this for me.
your's sincerely
Harry
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-04-13 | artravels116@gmail.com | 84 | view |
| 2020-04-04 | RV0209 | 89 | view |
| 2019-06-09 | harmankaur | 84 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 124, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...une. Probably I will be able to check-in by 11:30 pm same night as I verified on ...
^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...e conference meeting I have to attend. Also I would like to mention if there is a p...
^^^^
Line 5, column 319, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...m when compared to weekday and weekend. Hence it would be very generous of you, if yo...
^^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
... time and arranging all this for me. yours sincerely Harry
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, lastly, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 937.175257732 132% => OK
No of words: 275.0 206.0 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48363636364 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55684206049 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581818181818 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 375.3 290.88556701 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.83505154639 327% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0276748113 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0714285714 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316575536689 0.216113520407 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956694353441 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481404100178 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145142030111 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323123748065 0.0580467560999 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.