Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening what can government do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
In this modern era, there is an ongoing deliberation among people on disposal of rubbish. Nowadays, governments, face difficulties in wate disposal and I would like to suggest few solutions to eliminate this issue from the universe since it is a great threat to mankind as well as for wild lige and vegetation.
Firstly, we will lokk into the ways in which the rubbish is stored. Majority of the population do not have proper awareness on waste disposal and they do not know the consequences of wrongful waste disposal as well. For example if waste is dumped in the sea the aqua culture will be destroyed while adversely affectingthe ecological system. In some ocassions, general public face difficulties in finding places to dispose their rubbish and also there are limited places available for recycling as well. In addition, the quantity of electronic wastage has increased over the past decade, but the ways in which to dispose has not been popularized amongh people. Moreover, people tends to use more non disposable items since it is cheaper compared with the disposable materials.
However, governments have to take initiatives to reduce the amount of rubbish produced before it create a huge threat to their population. Governments can invest on lucrative amounts on recycling projects in order to minimize the rubbish, and they also can invest on research project on development of non disposal items and new recycling methods as wel. Besides that, government can make awareness on proper disposal of rubbish from childhood, while making a habit of segregating rubbish accordingly.
In conclusion, both the government and the individuals bear the responsibility of controlling the threat of rubbish either in a habiyual way or by imposing laws on general public. It is believed, that governments has to take clear and well st goals in eradicating rubbish problem because it is one of the way making a safe environment to their population.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 361, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
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Line 7, column 165, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...n a habiyual way or by imposing laws on general public. It is believed, that governments has t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, as for, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16666666667 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94429144318 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556603773585 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4291961554 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.384615385 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4615384615 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9230769231 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2253189012 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775826536205 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055679638211 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125010782351 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653918396617 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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