Cashless society is becoming a reality. More and more people are using credit cards for payment, and less people use cash. How realistic do you think it is ? And do you think it is beneficial or problematic?
In modern era, there is an ongoing deliberation among people on the topic of cashless society. Some people argue that there are advantages in being cashless, but on my point of view society should go for a cashless society. In this essay, I shall discuss on factors strengthening my argument while analyzing both the advantages and disadvantages of converting to a cashless society.
First and foremost, there are myriad of advantages that society can gain through cashless society. For an example, it will increase the intergrity, security and confidentiality of a particular person and the society. If someone lose a credit card it can easily be traced by the police with the assistance of advance technology. Other than that, people do not have to carry lot of money inside there pocket which is convenient for their day to day activities.
On the other hand, some people prefer to use cash than the credit cards such as old generation because they are not confident on technological advancements. For instance, cash is essential if there is no facilities available for credit card payments may be, in a third world country. Moreover, it is easy to pay small amounts in cash than using a credit card.
In conclusion, it is recommended to encourage people to use credit cards, but with high care on their liquidity level. In nutshell, if people use more credit cards their is a risk of becoming insolvent due to high credit levels. It is also beleived that, governments should impose necessary regulations to monitor and control the personal debt level before entering into a cashless society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, then, third, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 267.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01872659176 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86833195417 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573033707865 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.821254492 50.4703680194 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.076923077 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.25397266985 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298250612044 0.242375264174 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103082203672 0.0925447433944 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687482633676 0.071462118173 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1689713301 0.151781067708 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503915326416 0.0609392437508 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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