Many people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Meanwhile many people hold the belief that there are more options in life for people to choose these days, others do not. Personally, I totally agree that in the past, not everybody could be exposed to as many choices as we are today.
Firstly, it is the fact that the development of technology had spread out a humorous amount of information through all over the world. This means that people now can get access to to a wide range of ways to find the best solutions for their problem. Avery common case in point is hapening in education field. More than 50 years ago, there were no more than 300 universities for Vietnamese high school students to choose after graduating. However, thanks to the internet, students today can prepare a suitable list with many choices for their further study before finishing their compulsory education. From that list, then they can pick the best option for themselves which can be any type of studying such as correspondent course, evening class or hiring a personal tutor.
Secondly, in daily life we also get a lot of choices due to the improvement of manufacturing industry during the last 20 years with the rapid appearances of a huge number of branches and new convenient products through out the world. In the old days, the only way for us to get or give information to a relative who lived far away was via hand writing letter or telegram. But today, there are other convenient communication methods for us to choose such as emails, social network or smart cell phone.
In conclusion, I believe that people today have plenty of options to consider before making a decision which come as the result of the development in technology and manufacturing industry in recent years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
Meanwhile many people hold the belief that there ...
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Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...is means that people now can get access to to a wide range of ways to find the best s...
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Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: THROUGH_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
...of branches and new convenient products through out the world. In the old days, the only wa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81818181818 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65935296074 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8060751748 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.25 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134153755364 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477776886939 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568527088173 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0957010103981 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0746466537864 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.