In search of an appropriate job has not been easy. A few people hold the belief that people should choose the job early for having a comfortable work-life balance than changing the job commonly. In my opinion, I partly agree with the mentioned above idea for some following reasons.
On the one hand, the first reason is that an early decision on pursuing career helps them to learn many ways to tackle a number of experiences. The sooner they have the career, the better they know more knowledge. The second one is the time they use for choosing a job. For instance, if people have work truly after graduating their university, they would consider as wasting 4 years compared to their friends who work soon. The last one is that they make much money and have a satisfying job life than others. This is true of many billionaires in the world are likely to be a success when they started up their business very soon.
However, when the youth choose occupation early, it can lead to some disadvantages. Due to finding occupation too soon, they are easier to face up to scammers or fake companies. Moreover, breaking the law is the most important reason for not having a job too soon. For example, 16 is the age of having a job in several countries while 18 is used for the rest. Last but not least, it is difficult for employers to know exactly their employer‘s age so the bosses can assign unappreciated work for the staff. By way of illustration, one 20-year-old man can bring a stone to weigh 50kg but one 15-year-old man can not do it.
In conclusion, I partly agree with the idea that people choose the occupation early. It is suggested that they should start to find a job when they have enough physical and mental strength.
- In Many parts of the world today, there is a profitable market for products which lightens the skin.Outline the reasons for using such products and discuss the effect they have in terms of health and society. 61
- Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to get a satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- Nowadays older people who need employment have to compete with younger people What problems does this cause and what are the solutions 89
- The older people who need employment have to compete with younger ones What problems can this create What are some solutions 89
- Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to get a satisfying career life than those who frequently change their jobs To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59163987138 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61236160656 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559485530547 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0790932075 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2941176471 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41176470588 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197597943942 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638922247903 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582408938956 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130695429388 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609478321176 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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