Essay topics:
International visitors to New Zealand: Country of Origin
The chart shows the country of origin, it's the countries where the New Zealand's visitors come from.
The largest percentage, forty percent are people come from Australia. Twelve percent come from the UK and the percentage of people come from US is nine percent. There are three countries from East Asia mentioned in the chart, 3 percent people from South Korea, 4 percent from Japan and 5 percent from China. There are 27 percent from other countries.
In general, people from Australia, the US, UK and New Zealand are English speaking countries so they travel here more than from other countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 40, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
The chart shows the country of origin, its the countries where the New Zealands vi...
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Line 3, column 322, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'percents'?
Suggestion: percents
... and 5 percent from China. There are 27 percent from other countries. In general, pe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 33.7804878049 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 503.0 965.302439024 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 101.0 196.424390244 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9801980198 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.17015387972 3.73543355544 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35681002101 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 59.0 106.607317073 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584158415842 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 144.0 283.868780488 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5529256147 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8333333333 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165129314909 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11730140232 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.184212799461 0.0843802449381 218% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228357431448 0.15604864568 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.207136687596 0.0819641961636 253% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 40.7170731707 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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