Many people believe that having a fixed punishment for all crimes is more efficien.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of having a fixed punishment?
It is quite difficult to choose the right penalty for breaking a law. Some politicians state that the government should adopt the legal system with fixed punishment. This essay will consider both pros and cons of this system.
Let us start with the positive effects of fixed punishment. The first advantage is that criminals will receive the same punishment for a certain crime. All people, no matter circumstances, will be punished equally if they commit, for example, a pickpocketing. Another benefits is that there is no need for trial. The check of evidence is not required, since the accused will immediately be found guilty and get penalty. Furthermore, it save money on judges, juries and lawyers. The government can dismiss all the participants of court, which means that it will have no need to pay them salaries.
Despite the above mentioned merits, this type of judicial system has many demerits. Firstly, It is unfair to criminals under special circumstances. Some offenders break a law because of being driven either poverty or self-defense, so it will be unjust to punish them with serious felons. Secondly, many innocent people will be found guilty. Since there is no justice investigation, many sinless people will service their sentences in prison before the police find the true criminal. Moreover, the justice system will be inconsistent with the global standards. The country will have problems with foreigners, as the justice system in their home country may demand for trial with judges and lawyers prior to penalizing according to the local legal system.
In conclusion, although fixed penalty has many positive sides, it also causes many problems for the government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22710622711 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75816635674 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600732600733 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9136463107 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.2777777778 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1666666667 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205547942311 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060861871879 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561310330306 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13041646742 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558781792114 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.46 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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