Many people believe that having a fixed punishment for all crimes is more efficien.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of having a fixed punishment?
It is quite difficult to choose the right penalty for breaking an order. Some politicians state that the government should adopt the legal system with fixed punishment. This essay will consider both pros and cons of this penalisation.
Let us start with the positive effects of fixed punishment. To begin with, criminals will receive the same punishment for a certain crime. All people, regardless of the circumstances, will be punished equally, if they commit, for example, a pickpocketing. Another benefit is that there is no need for trial. Verification of evidence is an unnecessary step in the judgement, since the accused will immediately be found guilty and get penalty. Furthermore, it saves money on judges, juries and lawyers. Public authority can dismiss all the participants of court, which means that it will be pointless to pay them salaries, which will have a positive effect on the budget.
Despite the above mentioned merits, this type of judicial body has a few demerits. Firstly, It is unfair to criminals, who perpetrate a crime under special circumstances. Some offenders break a law because of being driven either poverty or self-defense, so it will be unjust to punish them as strictly as serious felons. Secondly, many innocent citizens will be found guilty. Since there is no justice investigation, most sinless people will serve their sentences in prison, before the police find either the true criminal or any proof of innocence. Moreover, the judiciary will be inconsistent with the global standards. The country will have problems with accused from other countries, as the justice system in their home country may demand for trial with judges and lawyers ahead of penalizing according to the local judicial authority.
In conclusion, although inflexible sentence has a great deal of positive sides, it also causes many problems for the government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2657807309 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89497093654 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634551495017 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.0294102887 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0555555556 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7222222222 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163856771659 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475104188761 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430636128961 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925764681046 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447347035215 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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