TPO18
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends.
people often influenced by other people around them in many environments. On of these environment is school. In schools, the leading actors of influencers are teachers and other students. In my opinion, students are influenced greater by their friends compare to their teachers for several reasons.
Firstly, students are influenced by their friends because students have similar traits and social status between themselves. students, who becomes close friends, generally have similar age and hobbies. In addition, they tend to spend more time together compare to teachers, which bring about an intimacy and trust between them. For example, when I was in high school, even if I have homework from tomorrow when my friends offered me to go cinema, I prefer to went to cinema with my friends rather than to do my homework. This example clearly shows that my friends influenced my decisions more than my teacher.
Secondly, teachers cannot be a strong influencer in students life because teachers represent the authority. Thus, students usually not maintain a tight relationship with teacher. if they insist on having a close ties with teacher, a student perceived as teachers pet, which is deteriorate their image between students’ classmates. Hence, students tend to behave prudent near teachers, fear them and can not share their secrets with them. For instance, when my best friend brake the aquarium and caused the death of fish inside in school, I protected him and didn’t tell the teacher who broke the aquarium because he asked me to do so.
In conclusion, I believe that students are more influenced by their friends rather than their teacher. because students have more common interests compare to teachers and teachers are a representative of the authority.
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- TPO18Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends. 70
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 286.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22727272727 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68487075657 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548951048951 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.6207384233 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4375 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6875 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341268752444 0.236089414692 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133945691986 0.076458572812 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111100958309 0.0737576698707 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25822765384 0.150856017488 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827581028293 0.0645574589148 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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