Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In modern times, a lot of people insist that it is a good way to accept an uncomfortable job or lack of funds. However, other people believe that we could find out to improve this situation. In this essay, I will discuss both points of view.
On the one hand, people could gain a comfort life, if they accept unsatisfactory job or salary. Because, most of the people can obtain living expense such as an electric bill, cell phone bill or house rent bill from that career. So, a plethora of people can give up to change their bad circumstance. For example, nowadays, many university students would give up to gain an occupation which related to their major because of unstable economic and low employment rate. So, they just receive their reality.
On the other hand, some people try to effort to get out of a bad situation. So, people could find out and deal with their bad circumstance through study. For instance, my neighbor, who called Jennifer, raised a poor house. Her parents could not support her study. However, she studied hard and some universities recognized her effort, she entered school and received a scholarship for 4 years. After graduated from university, she achieved her dream and became a doctor. Now, she overcomes her’s a bad situation and changed a good situation.
To sum it up, some people take their life without changing due to comfort or compromising reality. While others try to effort to change their life because of a better life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1224.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8188976378 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62540278538 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602362204724 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7998016704 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9411764706 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52941176471 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236645272298 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732139893058 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060897343044 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139393152267 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565040371201 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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