Lets condemn the fact that imported food is unhealthy therefore many people should love to buy imported food. Assuredly,consumption of imported food and locally produced food are depends upon the folk's taste like and dislike. In below two paras, I should try to try to make sense in why people buy imported food and what could be done to encourage public to buy local food.
However, quality of food is one of the first choice of any buyer. If local food is having not unto-the-mark quality than definitely people will love to better quality food, which could be imported also. In addition to above, seventy percent people love fish food only from japan because of its delicious taste. So that may be one the reason of buying imported food.
Certainly, Foreign food is good in quality and its uniqueness of taste. Local food is needed to cope-up the quality of food so that people will buy more local food.
At the end, both local and imported food are good but some work should be done to improve the quality of food, will boost the people to buy local food.
- Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
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- Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
- Some people say economic development is necessary to reduce the poverty in the world. Others say that economic growth should be stop immediately to stop damaging the environment. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
Lets condemn the fact that imported food is ...
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Line 1, column 120, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , consumption
...uld love to buy imported food. Assuredly,consumption of imported food and locally produced f...
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Line 1, column 256, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'try to'.
Suggestion: try to
...d dislike. In below two paras, I should try to try to make sense in why people buy imported f...
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Line 2, column 172, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...people will love to better quality food, which could be imported also. In additio...
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Line 2, column 198, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... quality food, which could be imported also. In addition to above, seventy percent ...
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Line 2, column 304, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...only from japan because of its delicious taste. So that may be one the reason of ...
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Line 2, column 313, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... japan because of its delicious taste. So that may be one the reason of buying importe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 1615.20841683 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 189.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63492063492 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42956833062 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 176.041082164 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497354497354 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 278.1 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4883055883 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.659304293658 0.244688304435 269% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.316669346184 0.084324248473 376% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149811124154 0.0667982634062 224% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.472235791736 0.151304729494 312% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0849949049689 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 78.4519038076 36% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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