The pie chart illustrates the differences in money spend between the US and the UK.
In general, spending for rent and food accounts for the largest proportion of expenses in both the UK and the US. In addition, people in both countries spend a similar percentage of their budget on the remaining four categories.
The UK use 30% of their budget for rent, accounts for the largest proportion. The second place is for food, which counted for 18% of their monthly expenses. In contrast, the US spend most of their money for food, with the proportion of 25% and spend less for rent of 22%.
People spend exactly the same rate for transportation and going out at 15%, the least for DVDs at 10% in both countries. Books spending is not too different between the UK and the US with 12% and 15% of their expenditures respectively.
- The graphs show a comparison of the expenses in the UK and the US 42
- The percentage of school-aged boys in two different age groups who participated in 5 different sports in the UK in 2010 61
- The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 56
- The percentage of school-aged boys in two different age groups who participated in 5 different sports in the UK in 2010 78
- Look at the maps below showing how the town of Harborne changes from 1936 to 2007, and summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features. Make comparison where relevant. 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, in addition, in contrast, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 688.0 965.302439024 71% => OK
No of words: 147.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68027210884 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48200454523 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.677300746 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 76.0 106.607317073 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517006802721 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 186.3 283.868780488 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.4566427185 43.030603864 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.0 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.375 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123192291471 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074301583746 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726721112269 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103872484133 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043667367046 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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