The given chart shows the statistics about what Australian children like to do in their free time.
In general, boys do more of each activities than girls and while boys are more active than girls, they all prefer to watch TV or videos in their spare time.
The percentage of youngsters likes watching TV or videos is equal between both genders and about 100%. That is also their most preferred activities. Electronic or computer games is preferred by boys more than girls, which is more than 80% when the figure for girls is just about 60%. Likewise, boys is more attracted by bike riding than girls. They involve in this activities nearly 80% when girls’s involvement is under 60%.
According to that, around 40% of boys enjoys skateboarding or rollerblading in their leisure time while the proportion of girls is only slightly more than 20%. In contrast, art and craft is the only activity that girls spend more time on, with the proportion of nearly 60%, much greater than approximately 35% of boys.
- The percentage of school-aged boys in two different age groups who participated in 5 different sports in the UK in 2010 61
- The graphs show a comparison of the expenses in the UK and the US 42
- The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 56
- A survey conducted for the places in which people gain access to the Internet from 1998 to 2004 62
- the graph below gives information about the preferred leisure activities of Australian children. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 361, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...bike riding than girls. They involve in this activities nearly 80% when girls's...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, likewise, so, while, in contrast, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88439306358 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56936253633 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578034682081 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8269458345 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8888888889 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138093986852 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062854038867 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411617580062 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0979374007806 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374358588953 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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