It has been said from decades that, health is wealth, which is true for eternity. A certain set of people advocate that the most innovative way to increase common health in a society is by providing them more sports facilities. However, on the other end of the spectrum, folks believe that such facilities would not be sufficient and other measures are essential as well. This essay will discuss both forth said views, also it will elaborate why in my opinion there are factors like healthy food, hygiene awareness, and better medical facilities can impact the public health more than sports facilities.
To embark on, exercising on a daily bases is imperative for better health, although in today's fast-paced life people found it very difficult to manage this activity with their busy work schedule. Also, by increasing the number of sports facilities, people could enjoy the activities which directly provide health benefits. For instance, people can spend seventy percent more time in sports center or open gym areas only if they have these facilities available in their proximity. Secondly, families and friends will give encouragement to join the daily routine exercise sessions if they have an easy approach to sports facilities. Certainly, public health will definitely improve if sports facilities will increase.
However, there are several other vital factors also which are comparatively more important than exercising. Firstly, a proper healthy diet is an essential part of a healthy life. According to an empirical survey conducted by Londons Queens University, around eighty percent of health-related issues are directly linked with disturbed eating habits of people around the globe. Secondly, appropriate and earliest medical care and facilities should also be improved for a healthy society. Lastly, efforts for making people aware of maintaining their hygiene is necessary. Hence, proper diet, better medical facilities, and awareness among the population about healthy and hygienic lifestyle is an absolute need.
To conclude, many efforts are essential for making our society healthy. Some have an opinion that by increasing numbers of sports facility this can be achieved, nonetheless, apart from this better medical care, healthy intake and awareness among the people could play a vital and crucial role in improving public health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, lastly, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, well, apart from, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1996.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45355191257 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66694099637 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571038251366 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 634.5 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2778835163 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.411764706 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5294117647 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64705882353 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270098917948 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851045780531 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068366418929 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180400049292 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690878302124 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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