The supporters of genetic research claim that genetic engineering is the answer to many problems and we t should be conducted and results should be rigorously applied? Is it true that genetic research has more benefits compared throwbacks?
With the advancement of modern technology today, comes lots of new founding in genetics science. Scientists working in the field have presented arguments saying that genetic engineering can be implemented in various aspects of our lives to help solve many problems. This essay agrees that modern genetic science should be applied and conducted to our lives for it presents much more advantages because it can help advancing our medical science and aids us in understanding deeper of ourselves.
To begin with, genetic engineering can be implemented in the medical field. it can help with the search for cure and methods of many kinds of diseases, such as cancer. For an instance, a breakthrough in medical genetics have found that transplanting backbone can aid in the recovery of leukemia, also known as blood cancer. In the future, new founding about genetics can help save thousands of lives if it is use effectively in all kinds of medical field.
Another benefit that humans can get from the advancing genetic science is that we get to understand ourselves better in a scientific method. In that way, we can apply those researches to help us with our lives. For example, several banks throughout the world has utilized retina and face scanner to build a better security. By gathering more information about ourselves as a human being, we will know what we lack of and what we need to improve.
In conclusion, scientific breakthrough throughout the decades has proven to be very useful and therefore should be applied to our lives. It has proven it’s aid in medical subjects, and it has also helped us to know ourselves deeper and as a result those knowledge have become very useful in aiding our lives to be more effective.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 415, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to advance' or 'advance'.
Suggestion: to advance; advance
...uch more advantages because it can help advancing our medical science and aids us in unde...
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Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...an be implemented in the medical field. it can help with the search for cure and m...
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Line 7, column 254, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this knowledge' or 'those knowledges'?
Suggestion: this knowledge; those knowledges
...o know ourselves deeper and as a result those knowledge have become very useful in aiding our l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97602739726 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76071370439 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493150684932 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6108751037 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.769230769 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263710502663 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100408644805 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579762484514 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159514260554 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372326912445 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.