The supporters of genetic research claim that genetic engineering is the answer to many problems and we t should be conducted and results should be rigorously applied? Is it true that genetic research has more benefits compared throwbacks?
The development of genetic engineering emerged some concerns about results and its implement. Some people believe that scientific research on genesis can solve and make some matters more clear. As a result of this, people should accept all the consequences which should be applied strictly in the real life. I believe that despite the failures in the past, genetic studies has more merits then demerits.
On the one hand, molecular researches on genes has been declared as a miracle in the past but it has partially ended up with some disappointment. In other words, problems which are ensued from genetic processing’s side affects have not solved yet. For example, various studies argued that genetically modified foods which are launched to halt the scarcity in the globe are found to be responsible for some types of cancers such leukemia in children. Hence, the drawbacks of genetic processing shouldn’t be undermined. It may leads fatal results and ethical concerns as well.
On the other hand, genetic engineering has been alleviated scarcity and cured definite disease. Firstly, the shelf-time of many products has increased thanks to the genetic engineering. For example tomatoes, an essential food of the poor, may survive up to two weeks which make it possible to export tomatoes from one country to another. Secondly, some genetic vectors such as viruses are used to cure end stage of retinitis pigmentosa, in what points all the treatment lost its meaning. Therefore, the advance in the genetic field facilitates people lives.
To conclude, despite the believes of some groups that scientific inventions of genetic engineering could solve all problem of people, it has also encompassed some negative results. In my opinion, it is a fact that molecular engineering of genes will progress and ,besides, it might answers to many disputes that have to be grappled by humankinds.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for example, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28289473684 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8630366533 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.39972826 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.375 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316218383107 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100877371574 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501574409043 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192363531301 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494056402754 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.