In some countries, younger people are neglecting their rights to vote. WHAT problems does this cause and what are some possible solutions?
It is true that not all categories of ages are greatly estimating the importance of voting, especially the young ones. While there are some negative impacts of this trend on both youth and their countries, some feasible solutions are available to overcome this problem.
The continuous retreat of young people from taking part in voting might lead to a sharp decline in their patriotism. To illustrate, voting is a right given to any mature citizen in order to participate in shaping a better future for their countries; therefore, neglecting this right reflects a sort of irresponsibility towards the homeland. This can lead to creating generations that have no well to fight for their countries against any danger. In addition, young citizens represent the major category of population in some countries, Egypt for example. If they are negating their political role, chances for corruption will increase. In the year 2011, the Egyptian revolution against the regimen happened as a result for 30 years of corruption as young people used to abstain from participation to select the best to represent them.
Undoubtedly, some possible measures can be taken to mitigate this phenomenon. One solution would probably be increasing the awareness of people towards the value of their votes in ballot boxes from childhood. In many countries, children get involved in voting through school elections; hence, they become active citizens from an early age. One further measure would be applying fines against citizens who refuse to vote during any public elections, and Australia is one of the countries which have been applying a 1000 dollar fine as a penalty for not participating in elections or referendums.
By way of conclusion, not only dereliction in voting may cause dire impact one citizens but it may also affect countries adversely, thus, governments should take some measures to deter this phenomenon from aggravation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 76, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one citizen', 'a citizen', or simply 'citizens'?
Suggestion: one citizen; a citizen; citizens
...liction in voting may cause dire impact one citizens but it may also affect countries advers...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, sort of, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27035830619 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.886386838 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605863192182 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4790860963 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.461538462 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6153846154 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280496941401 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100027542851 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832398418963 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170820708902 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480694099372 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.