In many countries, people in big cities either live alone or in small family units, rather than in large, extended family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend?
Nowadays, it has become popularly with lots of people who live in huge cities in many countries tend to live alone or in small household units than in large families which have some generations. I completely agree that this is a positive trend. The first point I would mention is that living alone or in a small family could occur fewer conflicts than in a large family. This could be explained is that there is quite large gap of living conceptions among members in a family. And if living in a small family, members are able to easier to getting on with other ones. A typical example is that the divergence between how to bring up children of modern parents and behind the time grandparents. So, I argue that members in small families would easier to understand and then, feel happier. The second point I would mention is that it gives the freedom, a laid-back feeling and an independent ability for people who live alone or in small families. Firstly, it bring to them the opportunity to live in their own way, do everything they love such as eating foods they prefer, watching television programs they favor, and so on. Secondly, they would be easy-going live in an expanse space because they have not to share the space with too many others. And finally, instead of relying on relatives, they would learn lots of valued things from getting along with life themselves, which is very necessary for these days.In conclusion, with these arguments, I believe that many people in modern cities who are looking for a life with freedom, pleasure, and independence as well through selecting live alone or in small families, not in large cities is a good trend.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: brings
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, well, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72068965517 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52384820271 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531034482759 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.9058181229 49.4020404114 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.454545455 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3636363636 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254289762541 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105900802547 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750305467283 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254289762541 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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