The graph reveals about average month by month temperature level with average time of sunny day for twelve months in cities such as London, New York and Sydney.
Overall, Sydney's temperature stabilized initially and plummets viciously downwards before it climbed off drastically. Although, both London and New York cities faced low temperature at start, they began to increased massively and experienced decline at the end period.
In January Sydney's climate was hot with 25 degree centigrade and remained stable for couple of months. The temperature then, decreased and hit lowest at the month of July with approximately 17 degree centigrade. Similarly, it created valley on the figure. The day began <span class="hiddenGrammarError" pre="began "></span> warm again and it consistently rose to around 24 degree centigrade in the end of November and it stabilized again. The total hours of sunshine, however, in the city was 2473.
New York and London temperature figure was tremendously low compared to Sydney.In January,the average amount of temperature of New York was nearly 5 degree while,it was around 8 degree in London. Both cities experienced more hot weather as the month went by. How New York faced six times more amount of temperature in July with nearly 30 degree contrast to March? The deficit had hit the peak and somehow dropped slowly but after the month of September it might had felled constantly through out the year with 5 degree at last month of the year. In addition, the temperature of London also significantly grew <span class="hiddenSuggestion" pre="grew "></span> over the months and it increased by more than 2 times yet declined drastically from August to mid of November with around 24 degree to 10 degree. Even so, it leveled off. Altogether,total hours of sunshine in New York and London was 25355 and 1180 respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, similarly, so, then, while, even so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 965.302439024 152% => OK
No of words: 271.0 196.424390244 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42066420664 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.97876678074 2.65546596893 150% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 106.607317073 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553505535055 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 283.868780488 156% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 68.6529649166 43.030603864 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.928571429 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289899716834 0.215688989381 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924585569154 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535261512213 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179855227052 0.15604864568 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0879046668398 0.0819641961636 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.