people benefit more from travelling in their own country than from travelling to foreign countries
People usually have many choices for spending their holiday and releasing their stress after a hard work. Many of them make a decision to travel and visit new places that they never have seen before. Some travelers select some cities in their country that they never went but others want to see foreign countries. To some extent I subscribe to the idea that travelling in our own country is more beneficial than going to other countries.
To begin with, the travel cost is lower for people who visit their countries than foreign travelers. Each journey has special cost such as buying plane ticket, reserving hotel or eating foods and people can reduce their travel cost by visiting their country. For example, the distances between different cities in a country is lower than different cities in different countries so the price of ticket reduces in this situation. Furthermore, hotels usually increase their residents cost for tourists who come from foreign countries but their coexistence can rent rooms with low price. These advantages help people to save their money during their journey.
Second, travelling through our own country help us to know more about other ethnicities that live with us in a same country. Depends on the area of a country many people with different culture and language live together but they always have little knowledge about each other. This inter-country travel help us to get more information about them. For example, in my country, 4 ethnicities exist and all of them have their special religion such as Islam or special national work such as farming. When we spend our vacation with these people we can know them.
However, people who select foreign countries to visit have some advantages to experience different life style or different geographical situation that they never live there. For example, some countries do not have sea or ocean and are drought all seasons so people from these countries can visit beautiful sea by travelling to these countries.
In conclusion, contemplating all the aforementioned reasons, travelling in own country is beneficial because reducing some major cost also it is a chance to get more information about other ethnicities. However, visiting foreign countries is a unique chance for people to experience different living situation.
- movies or tv have more negative effect than positive effects on the young people behavior 83
- in the past it was easir to identify what kind of career or job lead to successful future 73
- the rules of society for young people are strict 76
- the advantage and disadvantage of allocating tax to unhealthy behavior 76
- Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y many people with different culture and language live together but they always h...
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Line 3, column 495, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... special national work such as farming. When we spend our vacation with these people...
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Line 5, column 311, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... experience different living situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, second, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1940.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17333333333 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62446608327 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 591.3 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2101019989 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.777777778 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.438475926295 0.236089414692 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156850181003 0.076458572812 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828619090067 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267451148934 0.150856017488 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049211428914 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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