In the recent years, the number of crime have been an increased and begun to appear as a significant problem because of several reasons, such as personal issues, unemployment, psychological or population growth. Therefore, the death penalty is throught to be the solution to reduce and even prevent a crime rate. In this essay, this argument will discuss whether can be seen as a valid punishment or not.
There are several reasons why government or people see capital punishment as a valid. Firstly, it is seen as a way to bring peace and silent. Actually, by fearing of death, people who have a potential a criminal can refrain to committe a crime. In other words, thanks to regulation of crimes' laws, as a slay, theaf, terrorism, rape and many other types of crimes can be gained a dissuasiveness. Thus, cities would be liveable and safety, and also the standard of living in countries will rise and this punishment method will positively impact on countries in all respects. For example, in Pakistan, the crime of terrorism are controlled by enforcing death punishment.
On the other hand, there are also several reasons to reject that death penalty is an appropriate solution and punishment method. To begin with, it is unfair judgment, because any goverments or individuals have no rights to kill someone who even committe a serious crime. In other words, like feeding, living is a basic human right and no one cannot take away this right by any laws or restrictions. Furthermore, due to threat and helplessness, many people sometimes commit crimes that they do not want to do, but are forced by someone. Also, many criminals regret after their doing evilest. For these reasons, the only way to stop these kinds of people and crimes is that no capital punishment. Everyone deserves a second chance, so psychological treatments and social event should be provided for them. Criminals should be reintegration and released from prison without the idea of doing harmful behavior again.
In conclusion, we live in a world that is getting worse because of the crime rate, but the solution is not capital punishment, because of human rights and deserving a second chance. Instead, mental and physical requiretments of those who harm society and the environment should be completed in prisons, and reintegration into society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ent or people see capital punishment as a valid. Firstly, it is seen as a way to bring ...
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...thanks to regulation of crimes laws, as a slay, theaf, terrorism, rape and many other ...
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Suggestion:
...als should be reintegration and released from prison without the idea of doing ha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1947.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 386.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04404145078 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84529209969 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541450777202 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0651823478 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.473684211 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3157894737 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84210526316 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262597073241 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758140952305 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661913075201 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163951437451 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.071846926436 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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