The world would be a happier place if we all enjoyed our work.
To what extend do you agree or disagree with this view?
Nowadays, there are so many ideas are put forward to make world happier. While one of them is kindness or money, some people believe that if people enjoy their work which is enough to have a happier world. This essay will give some arguments about this issue.
First of all, there is no doubt that the most people spend the majority day at work. Therefore, it is extremely important that the occupation is enjoyable and interesting. In other words, doing something with love and voluntarily is turn that job into a hobby, so people fulfill their works more willing. In addition, they can become more positive, kind and helpful in their life outside, and their communication with the world can improve. Thus, more contribution will be supplied to the world to would be a happier place.
Nevertheless, many situations are also necessary for people to love their work, such as good relationship with colleagues, comfortable and safe working areas and having an understanding employers and also sufficient money. Any negative situation in the workplace can cause people to lose motivation and willingness, combat with stress and pressure, and these issues can have negative effects on people's live outside. Furthermore, people who see and enjoy their work as a hobby can become workaholics over time. this may cause problems for their relationships, their mentally and physically health, because finding balance in life between the stress, pressure and priority of work and life outside of work can hard. Thus, people can live a problematic and unhappy life while they all enjoy their work.
In conclusion, in my opinion, the most important thing to make the world a happier place is that providing enjoyable works and happiness, because happiness is contagious and when encouraged can spread throughout an entire world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, while, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, first of all, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20875420875 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72199680898 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6586099912 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2857142857 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223324275798 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893713176329 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517575875647 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155369665757 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371789443482 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.