Climate change is one of the most significant threats facing the world today, because climate change is now affecting every country, people and animals on every continent. Therefore, some people believe that developed countries have a more responsibility to fight climate change, but others think that all countries shoul have equal responsibilities attitude to protect environment. In this essay, these argues will be compared and explained some ideas.
First of all, developed nations, which have high populations, have more responsible for the destruction of land and resources, because rich countries create more pollution, and they have leads to more production and consuming. For instance, under the name of industrialization are mixed many harmfull substances into the water and land. Emission of the carbon which causes climate change are the highest in developed countries due to the transportation. Furthermore, level of sea is affected by atmospheric conditions and their levels on the earth are rising day by day, so many cities, especially undeveloped cities, are completely submerged. Also, many waterborne and airborne infectious diseases are strongly influence by climate changes, and several are common within cities. On the other hand, developing countries can cause more damage to the climate changes, because they are still in the improving stages, and are not even aware of how they are effecting the environment, such as cutting too many trees and using more water and fossile fuels. For all these reasons, the tempreature, rainfall and moisture balanced of our planet are deteriorating, and the Earth tends to be higher warmer climate. Therefore, this situation have negative effect on every continent.
Actually, the developed nations have more opportunities to find a solution for climate change or slow down and ending this problems. Thanks to the improving science and technology, of course, they can create more effective solutions, such as using renewable energy sources and recycling. Nevertheless, paying attenttion to small things, such as planting a tree in front of everyone's home or the use of less car will be have greate benefit in preventing this problem.
In conclusion, currently, population of low countries have the lower impact on the global environment, while developed countries' environmental damaging have massive effects on undeveloped countries like everywhere. However, I do not believe that especially developed countries should take responsibilities for the solution of climate changes, so everyone should to do something, as the planet is ours.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, of course, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2212.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62849872774 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23450006794 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559796437659 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 704.7 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.4064021154 49.4020404114 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.0 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0714285714 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6428571429 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400208543922 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135082096702 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138961890327 0.0667982634062 208% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269818493161 0.151304729494 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127689521525 0.056905535591 224% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 50.2224549098 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.67 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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