Some people believe all employees should have the same amount of holiday time, no matter what job do they have. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
Some people argue that all employees should have the same amount of holiday time regardless of their occupations. Personally, I disagree with this idea because every job is different and people have their own preference in terms of taking time off.
Some positions, such as doctor and nurse, require people to physically show up at their job locations. There are no other ways for them to perform job duties. Other jobs, however, can be done remotely. For example, many technology companies nowadays have their employees work remotely. A developer can write programs as long as they have a computer and internet. As a result, people who work from home can enjoy family time while delivering work results. It is not fair for a doctor who spends five days at the hospital to have the same holiday time as a computer engineer who stays at home every day.
Career oriented people would enjoy working long hours while others do not. Career driven people probably would not take holiday time into consideration while choosing jobs. However, people who enjoy more family time would choose a job that has a better life-work balance for them. If we apply a standard holiday time to all type of jobs, both types of people would be unsatisfied since their needs are unfulfilled.
In conclusion, I disagree with the idea that all employees should have the same holiday time. It is not reasonable to apply the same rule to all the jobs. Reasons being the nature of different jobs are varied and people have different needs in holiday time.
- Some reports have discovered the incidence of violence /crimes committed by young women is increasing. Give possible reasons and and recommendations to the situation. 78
- Some people want the government to spend money in looking for life on other planets but others think it is a waste of public money as there are many problems need to be solved on the earth Discuss both views and give your own opinion 81
- Some people believe all employees should have the same amount of holiday time, no matter what job do they have. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement. 56
- It is generally believed that education is of vital importance to the development of individuals and the well-being of societies. What should education consist of to fulfill both these functions? 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87022900763 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44575196984 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522900763359 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2035015557 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.75 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.375 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338062816991 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123222150364 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102488176831 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24364929675 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101242982326 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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