Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday.
Write a letter to your friends. In your letter
• thank them for the photos and for the holiday
• explain why you didn’t write earlier
• invite them to come and stay with you
Dear friends,
Hello! I am at pink of health and hope you would be sailing at same boat.
I received the photographs of our holiday trip few days before, I apologize to reply so late actually I was very busy with office our, as you know I joined the new place and I am working around the clock to give my best to company. Well after seeing the pictures all that beautiful memories started ringing in my mind, we had great fun that was one of the best holiday trip of my life and that's all because of you.
Now it's my turn to show you my place, I would love to invite you all to land on my sofa couch in coming summer holidays.There are ample of interesting places here and I know you would love them,so may thrill and adventurous sports activities are also there, which are performed under the supervision of experts.I really don't want to listen any excuse you all are coming to me in next vocation.
I will be waiting for you all. hope to see you soon.
Your loving,
Tina.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear friends, Hello! I am at pink of health and hope y...
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Line 3, column 389, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...of the best holiday trip of my life and thats all because of you. Now its my turn t...
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Line 4, column 5, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ife and thats all because of you. Now its my turn to show you my place, I would l...
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Line 4, column 121, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...my sofa couch in coming summer holidays.There are ample of interesting places here an...
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Line 4, column 194, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , so
...aces here and I know you would love them,so may thrill and adventurous sports activ...
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Line 4, column 312, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...formed under the supervision of experts.I really dont want to listen any excuse y...
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Line 4, column 314, Rule ID: PRP_RB_NO_VB[1]
Message: Are you missing a verb?
...rmed under the supervision of experts.I really dont want to listen any excuse you all are c...
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Line 4, column 321, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...der the supervision of experts.I really dont want to listen any excuse you all are c...
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Line 6, column 32, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hope
...ion. I will be waiting for you all. hope to see you soon. Your loving, Ti...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: YOUR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'you're' or 'you are'?
Suggestion: You're; You are
... for you all. hope to see you soon. Your loving, Tina.
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Line 8, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... hope to see you soon. Your loving, Tina.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, may, really, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 799.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.29569892473 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31732903888 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650537634409 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 129.312941095 44.8134815571 289% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 114.142857143 76.5299724578 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5714285714 16.8248392259 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 4.34317383033 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229956360438 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118498790874 0.0766984524023 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0258882601108 0.0603063233224 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129730079033 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500860948373 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 70.7449484536 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.96 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 8.62886597938 197% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.