Cinema attendance by age group in Great Britain.
Given is line graph representing the information about attendance of cinema by groups of age in Britain over a 16 period in various years.
it can be seen in general, the attendance of cinema by distinctive age groups was an upward trend, although there were some fluctuations in each group.
Firstly, it is clear that group of age 15-24 years accounted for about 16% in 1984, and increased steadily at around one-third in 1989. Then, over the next years, there was two fluctuations and they remained gradually at over a half. Finally, it reached a peak at almost 60% and showed the highest period.
Secondly, the group of age 35 and over was the least visitors in cinema yet it rose significantly from the beginning to the remaining period.
Turning to group of people 7-14 old, it was the second largest viewers of cinema at one tenth at the beginning, while the next position was group of 23-35 old at about 5%. Both of them jumped gradually and fluctuated over the period shown, however it reached the same amount at 30% in the last period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...in over a 16 period in various years. it can be seen in general, the attendance ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 864.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67027027027 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55667104593 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583783783784 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3616991164 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 5.23603664747 215% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284491489968 0.215688989381 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134612867407 0.103423049105 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132144802139 0.0843802449381 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201768398516 0.15604864568 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117091381356 0.0819641961636 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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