During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.
Dear John,
I am Rekha Steffahin from London,we met in the Singapore airlines on 24th June 2019.I am writing this letter to tell you that I am really interesting to work as a chef for one of your restaurants .
Let me explain in more detail.I have successfully completed “XYZ” hotel Dear John,
I am Rekha Steffahin from London,we met in the Singapore airlines on 24th June 2019.I am writing this letter to tell you that I am really interesting to work as a chef for one of your restaurants .
Let me explain in more detail.I have successfully completed “XYZ” hotel management course in 20018 and currently working as a main chef in famous hotel called “Shangrila” in Singapore since 2009. Since I have more than 10 years of hands on experience,I am seeking for an opportunity to join an overseas famous hotel chain.Because of these reasons,I believe that I am the best fit for your restaurant.
Could you be able to give an opportunity to showcase my skills and experiences by arranging an interview,in order to work with your team? It would mean lot to me if you could give me a golden opportunity to join with your restaurants chain as soon as possible.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely,
Rekha.
course in 20018 and currently working as a main chef in famous hotel called “Shangrila” in Singapore since 2009. Since I have more than 10 years of hands on experience,I am seeking for an opportunity to join an overseas famous hotel chain.Because of these reasons,I believe that I am the best fit for your restaurant.
Could you be able to give an opportunity to showcase my skills and experiences by arranging an interview,in order to work with your team? It would mean lot to me if you could give me a golden opportunity to join with your restaurants chain as soon as possible.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely,
Rekha.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 32.9175257732 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 26.3917525773 205% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 937.175257732 171% => OK
No of words: 325.0 206.0 158% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92307692308 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 3.78020617076 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22527484918 2.54303337028 127% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.32 0.622605031667 51% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.0 290.88556701 167% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 1.44329896907 554% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.234606077 44.8134815571 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.333333333 76.5299724578 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0833333333 16.8248392259 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.29896907216 209% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 2.54639175258 864% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0860159406931 0.216113520407 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466505694604 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405816607913 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0612593755073 0.12726935374 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420457184039 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 8.37731958763 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 7.45979381443 169% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.48 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.