TPO 3: Agree or disagree: It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
Without a shadow of a doubt, friendship plays an important role in people's lives, the prominence of which cannot be neglected. Each individual, throughout his life span, meets a great number of people and establishes friendships with some of them according to what they have in common. some people are amenable to the idea that retaining old ties of frienship is in the priority in comparison to forming new relationships. however, others hold the conviction that making new friends is more beneficial and important to people. I, personally, subscribe to the idea that strengthening the bonds with old friends has merits that outweighs the advantages of building a new relationship. my reasons supporting this idea are manifold, three of which are the most conspicuous ones, and I will elaborate upon hereunder.
The most exquisite point to mention has to do with the fact that the more time people have spent together, the more they will be aware of the shortcomings and strength points of each other and the level of cognition increases. it is axiomatically clear that the old friends know each other’s interests and beliefs deeply, which is the direct consequence of experiencing several situations together. it is no exaggeration of fact if I say that an old friend can be as close as brothers or sisters, and helpful as they are in adversities. according to the level of familiarity the close friends have with each other, they can guide one another in difficulties and help each other to overcome the otherwise undefeatable problems. In such conditions, the old friend might be more kind-hearted and sympathetic toward them. As an example, I have an old friend who have been helpful for me during the time that I was struggling with cancer. Had not I had invaluable help of such a close friend, I might not have been successful in recovering my health again.
The other noteworthy point that reinforces the preceding assertion that keeping close friends is vital is that it seems that old friendships are more probable to last for a long time afterwards. it is crystal clear that some disagreements and conflicts are inevitable in any relationship, let alone a long one which has encountered several obstacles in its way. however, the old friends could have reached on a consensus and have solved their problems, in the past years. Therefore, in the cases that a misunderstanding arises, resolving the dispute will be uncomplicated and straightforward. it indicates that it is more likely that they can do the same in the future. Nevertheless, some virtues of making new friends cannot be easily neglected. meeting new people and forming a friendship with them will burgeon the social abilities of a person. In addition, it may expand their perspective due to being acquainted with new points of view. Nonetheless, there is a higher risk of the advent of the problems in a young friendship.
The last but not least reason to mention is that the old friends have more interests in common with us. Additionally, all of us have memorable memories with our old friends which is really enjoyable to recall them together and talk about them. we can spend quality time with each other. As an example, whenever my friends and I gather to see each other, we have quite a few memories and interests to share.
In conclusion, considering all the aforementioned reasons, in spite of the fact that making new friends would be fruitful for a person, a far-sighted person does not take the blessing of an old friendship for granted and considers it as a blessing in disguise which is a missing link in the thriving of a person. it is worthwhile that people keep their old friendships which culminate in a longer gauranteed future. In addition, they can take advantage of the help of their friends in the cases that they are in a desperate need of help.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, nevertheless, nonetheless, really, so, then, therefore, while, as to, in addition, in conclusion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 15.1003584229 212% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 28.0 11.0286738351 254% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 86.0 52.1666666667 165% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3208.0 1977.66487455 162% => OK
No of words: 653.0 407.700716846 160% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91271056662 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.05508305356 4.48103885553 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97689911425 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 290.0 212.727598566 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.444104134763 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 972.9 618.680645161 157% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6750571735 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.620689655 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5172413793 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55172413793 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210817291447 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673922376984 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594945303113 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134971985767 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266980445405 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 145.0 86.8835125448 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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