Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Before holidays, choosing the destination can be a time-consuming problem. For college students, they need to make decisions on the jobs. Also, for workers, they might think whether they need to change the jobs. Thus, from my perspective, I agree with the statement that we have too many choices today.
To begin with, people need to decide how to spend the holidays, which has perplexed the busy workers. In China, most programmers are required to work from nine in the morning to nine in the evening, six days a week. There are only two holidays for them in October and January. Therefore, making holiday plans can be extremely tough. How many days they go travelling and how long they relax themselves at home usually take them a long time to decide. Even if they choose to travel, which place of interest to visit can be difficult to decide as well. Hence, holidays, though providing time for workers to be away from the endless tasks in the company, they have to face plenty of choices.
Besides, for students, confronted with a variety of jobs, they feel hesitated and confused. Whether a highly paid but unsatisfactory job outweighs a satisfactory job with low salary is a big problem. Whether working in big cities is better than in the small cities needs considering a lot. Big cities offer lots of opportunities of many companies, while most students can only afford to buy a house in a small city. Then a paradox appears that working in cities like Beijing, Shanghai entails spending most of the money earned on the renting, whereas working in small cities such as Tangshan indicates making money less than ten thousand yuan every month and few opportunities to change jobs. All these factors exert huge impacts on the promotion and the future lifestyle. However, for a senior student seeking jobs, he has to choose from thousands of companies, which inevitably confuse him a lot.
All in all, the development of cities indeed provides more choices, but it is harder for people to choose when facing so many choices.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 201, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whether” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...y job with low salary is a big problem. Whether working in big cities is better than in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so, then, therefore, thus, well, whereas, while, as to, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8591954023 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6061349082 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57183908046 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9336774939 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3157894737 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21052631579 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103196236672 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.034449222708 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677735685807 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0803330272371 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418251651222 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.