These two bar charts compare the percentage of households that owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.
In general, as the year passed, it is clear that households in owned accommodation tended to increase where households in rented accommodation tended to decrease.
In detail, households in owned accommodation started around 20 percent in 1918, and consistently increased to around 30 percent in 1939 and 1953. It continued to increase to around 50 percent in 1971 and around 60 percent in 1981. The increase continued in 1991 to around 70 percent. It then remained in around 70 percent in 2001, before slightly decreased in 2011 to around 60 percent.
Furthermore, households in rented accommodation started around 70 percent in 1918, but then fell to around 60 percent in 1939 and 1952. The decrease continued from 1961 in around 50 percent. It then decreased again in 1971 until 1991 from around 50 percent to 30 percent. A decade later in 2001, it remained unchanged in around 30 percent, until finally rose slightly in 2011 to around 30 percent.
Overall, the movements of number of households in owned accommodation and rented accommodation in England are Wales are in contrary.
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 61
- Parents often give children everything they ask for and do what they like. Is it good for children? What are the consequences when they grow up? 61
- The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. 11
- the two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant 56
- The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, then, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 33.7804878049 172% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1030.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12437810945 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95622878537 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.388059701493 0.547539520022 71% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5843776661 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6363636364 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 5.23603664747 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167798393739 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100152343559 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122869218844 0.0843802449381 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187926361831 0.15604864568 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127669876586 0.0819641961636 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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