In recent years, life has become more stressful than it has ever been. As a consequence, more and more people are suffering from stress-related problems. What factors are contributing to this increase and what do you think can be done to overcome the current problems?
There is an issue about health disorders caused by stressful life. Some doctors state that modern lifestyle is the main source of stress. In this essay, I will consider the main reasons for it and suggest possible solutions to deal with them.
Let us start with the factors why many people have stressful days. The first reason is that the workload has increased to the stressful amount. Employees usually feel stressed, because now they do more complex jobs than in the past, which often involves a great deal of mental effort. Another cause of stress is that the level of noise in the street has become unbearably loud. The participants of traffic are often subjected to the pervasive noisiness in the public places, so at the end of the day they frequently have either headaches or insomnia. Furthermore, people often eat unhealthy food. The frequent consumption of junk food contributes to stress conditions as well, since people obtain fewer nutrients, which make them less resistant to challenges of modern world.
However, some doctors advise to assume the following measures to tackle those reasons. Firstly, overloaded employees should lower the number of hours at work. To deal with the stress at work, people should come to an agreement with their boss about cutting the working time by twenty five percent. Consequently, they would have more time to relax at home. Secondly, people ought to use devices to decrease the disturbing noise. In noisy streets, people should, for example, put headphones to block both roaring cars and buzz in cities. Moreover, they should also adopt healthy diet. Stressed people need to eat the type of food, which is rich in nutrients, and try to quit the habit of dinning at fast food restaurants.
In conclusion, many people suffer from stress caused by different factors, but I think that it is probable to deal with them by taking the above mentioned actions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: assuming
...world. However, some doctors advise to assume the following measures to tackle those ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00313479624 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49929186815 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623824451411 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7531328133 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7894736842 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36842105263 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191219010523 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548151653515 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403572031224 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116330079314 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356660228655 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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