In the past, communication was done through letters, messengers, fax and the rest. However, with improving of technology, in todays world, communication has become much more effortless.From this regard, the mobile phone has begin to dominate people lives as never before. This essay will discuss advantages and disadvantages of using mobile phones.
First of all, formerly, the mobile phone was only functioned as portative communication tool, but today the term of mobile phone is undebible, because almost everyone has a mobile phone, so they seem indispensable communication tool. However, there are some disadvantages of their usage. Firstly, mobile phones create a significant distraction for people, especially, while driving, working or studying. Due to making calls, text or even video calls, it is not only effect on distracting productivity in school or work, but also road accidents caused. Secondly, if mobile phone is not used carefully, it can isolate from family or friends around people. For example, when a group of people bring together to drink coffee, focusing of constantly mobile phone can emerged communicational gap. Furthermore, there are some disadvantages about the long-term exposure to radiation that comes to mobile phone and spending long time on bright screen. For example, network waves can result in skin cancer, and playing online games and long time chatting can result eye problems, headache and sleplessness.
On the other hand, mobile phones have massive role to create significant improvements to communication and information access in modern worlds. The first advantage of mobile phone is global communication. Thanks to calling, texting, video calls and even full socia media platform, people will can connect with friends, family or even make a new friendship around the world. Secondly, there are numerous learning opportunities available to people via mobile phone. In addition, providing of safety through mobile phone is the another positive thing. For example, when people forget or get lost direction, a mobile phone GPRS can help people find way.Finally, the modern mobile phone is a rescuer. In other words, through only one button or touching, people can send photos, videos, documents and even money with mobile phones.
In conclusion, having of mobile phone, the advantages and disadvantages are significantly effect on human life. Nevertheless, I think, the important thing is using of wisely, because a mobile phone can be one of the best tool people will ever have.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: From
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Suggestion: begun
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Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...ext or even video calls, it is not only effect on distracting productivity in school o...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Finally
...ile phone GPRS can help people find way.Finally, the modern mobile phone is a rescuer. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, while, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2143.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46683673469 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94166944919 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566326530612 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 678.6 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.56429157 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.15 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230091348474 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852821353584 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056145871072 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159621443404 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0103461643253 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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