Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health and diet. Others however believe that governments should make sure that their citizens have a healthy diet.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people tend to think that they should take care of their own body, health and diet. In comparison, others feel that it is a duty of governments and they should have plan for their society diet. Nowadays, for many people especially adults, healthy foods consumption is so popular and they usually try to eat some vital food such as proteins and vegetables. However, there are both pros and cons to deciding to do this. In this essay, I will discuss about advantages and disadvantages of this topic.
It is certainly obvious, people can checkup their body situations themselves accurately and most of them have enough information about their body. For instance, scientist researches in 2012 illustrate that more than 75 percent of people in developed countries have an annual checkup at least. It leads to increasing health level in the society. Hence, this results indicate, this is an essential topic all over the world.
Turning to the other side of the argument, one of the most important tasks of governments is taking care of their citizen. Besides, they should create some departments or associations to supervise health and diet of the society. For example, there is a health department in Canada which considers diet of people and prescribe them an appropriate diet. Unfortunately, in some underdeveloped countries such as African countries, the governments do not pay attention to their citizen. They just utilize them to become wealthier.
All in all, in spite of that government should have a plan to consider society health, people should be careful about their health. They need to weigh up advantages and disadvantages and make a decision about their lifestyle. Personally, I prefer to take care of myself because I aware of my body situation and consume vitamins, protein and mineral everyday.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 171, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'planned'.
Suggestion: planned
...uty of governments and they should have plan for their society diet. Nowadays, for m...
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Line 1, column 253, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'foods'' or 'food's'?
Suggestion: foods'; food's
... many people especially adults, healthy foods consumption is so popular and they usua...
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Line 4, column 349, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...d consume vitamins, protein and mineral everyday.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, however, if, so, at least, for example, for instance, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10067114094 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82865006751 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560402684564 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9846291329 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4117647059 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5294117647 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29411764706 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359114478505 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113054369688 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0970583509607 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221802643716 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734443179851 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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