You recently organized an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter
- say what the participants liked about the hotel
- explain why they were unhappy about the food
- suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future
Dear manager,
my name is xyz, I conducted an all-day meeting for ABC company took over in your hotel last Friday. I write this letter to provide overall feedback received from our employees.
Firstly, taking the positive sides, the hotel staff were well behaving and contributed best in service, also the amenities were admirable. Good car parking was provided, however, more sign boards to the zone would help the customers.
Now coming to food that served was appalling, even a few of our employees had stomach cramps the next day. There were a lot of escalation that happened in our company regarding the food served specifically on the foul-smelling pizza and my company management has decided to issue a notice seeking explanation regarding the food served on the event.
So, I would strongly recommend to improve the quality of your food next time. please be mindful food poisoning is lethal and please make sure the ingredients added food were not expired.
Thanks and regards,
xyz
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear manager, my name is xyz, I conducted an all-day m...
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Line 4, column 54, Rule ID: WERE_VBB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: where; we
...ing the positive sides, the hotel staff were well behaving and contributed best in s...
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Line 4, column 236, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s to the zone would help the customers. Now coming to food that served was appal...
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Line 8, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommend improving'.
Suggestion: recommend improving
...d on the event. So, I would strongly recommend to improve the quality of your food next time. pl...
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Line 8, column 80, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Please
...ve the quality of your food next time. please be mindful food poisoning is lethal and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 32.9175257732 39% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 840.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09090909091 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59702450351 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.690909090909 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6512509149 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3333333333 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 4.34317383033 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225203644613 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745899796293 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653977432405 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124276613331 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687107034831 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.