Every country should have a free health service, even if this means the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Over the last few years, there has been a debate over whether medical care should be provided at no cost to people. I have the notion that previous statement is the governments’ responsibilities even if it could be hard to provide expensive medicines. This will be shown by looking at the importance of having free medical care and how to overcome the pricy treatments.
First and foremost, it is the authorities’ duty to ensure that health care is available to everyone regardless of how much money they own. This is because one of the most important human rights is to receive medical treatment whenever it is needed. In other words, it is stated in the majority of constitutions that all people have the right to obtain suitable education as well as proper medical treatment. If, instead, health care was not free, the poor would become ill, which could result in infection of the rest of the people.
Furthermore, some claim that it could be hard to continuously provide expensive medicines for free. For instance, in Egypt, average cancer treatment costs 8000 EGP every month, and it takes several months for the patient to recover. On the other hand, all people would be cured from regular diseases. To solve the high cost of rare medicines, the rich may pay for its total prices, but the government should provide these medicines at lower cost for the poor. This will make the rich shoulder the finance burden with the government.
By way of conclusion, although medical treatment should be provided freely to all people since it is an essential right, the rich should pay for the highly-cost medicines in order to provide these treatments to poor people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, look, may, so, well, for instance, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92957746479 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77433507924 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573943661972 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8005063104 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.692307692 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196029194596 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07111390717 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333870740416 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123841199015 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315522873713 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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