In developing countries, tourism has disadvantages or advantages?
The phenomenon of tourism in developing countries are increasing in the last few years. if we think in one disadvantage like contamination or advantage like to show beautiful places in the world, we have different opinions around the world. Many people are according to thinking that tourism is an important part of the economy and for share different perspectives with other communities but other people claim about some tourist do not respect the culture and the monuments when they will visit. In this case I will discuss both opinions in this essay.
First, is important to understand that developing countries are really expensive to visit, and the government are making effort to attract people to come and explore new places, with different offers and less requirements. A big reason to do that, is because the tourism love to travel for different places in the same holidays, so a big advantages is to promote small cities to encourage the local economy. For example, Australia has small but important cities that tourism love to go, like Adelaide, and this part of the economy are increasing the local business.
However, developing countries like Australia now has a new kind of tourism, and if young people, to like travel around the world without spend money, so they found way like volunteering to meet new places and people and this kind of tourism sometime does not have a big impact in the community.
To conclude, the impact about tourism in developing countries always become controversial, but in my opinion has more advantages that disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, really, so, for example, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 259.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08494208494 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81173348173 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513513513514 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 418.5 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.8477471145 50.4703680194 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.333333333 104.977214359 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7777777778 20.9669160288 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228540194851 0.242375264174 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992115893164 0.0925447433944 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687618676577 0.071462118173 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155990022144 0.151781067708 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457439102878 0.0609392437508 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 12.6369458128 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 53.1260098522 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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