Dear Sara,
I just received your mail about the difficulties that you are facing at work. I am really sorry to know that your new boss is giving you a hard time.
After I gave birth to my son last year, when I got back to work, I had a hard time too. It was not easy to deal with the changes in the organization and take care of my son at home. Sometimes, it is hard to maintain a work life balance, especially for a nursing mother. At that time, my boss was not aware of my situation at home and was quite inflexible about working from home.
However, I have learnt from my experience. All women can avail an extended maternity leave for a year or go on a sabbatical for two years. Developmental Psychologists and doctors suggest that it is crucial for a mother to attend to the child in their early years. To transition smoothly for a new mother to get back to their careers lot of companies have introduced work from home and flexible work schedules. I suggest, you talk to the Human Resources department and avail these options. Also, suggest you have a discussion with your new boss about your suggestion and explore a solution that works best for you and the boss.
I hope you find my suggestions useful. I cannot wait to come and visit the little one this summer.
Love,
Rajie
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- Some people believe that employment over the age of 60 is not right and creates lots of problems So people should retire after 60 and not work To what extent do you agree or disagree 76
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1061.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 240.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42083333333 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52899505184 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 332.1 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5093727846 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.7857142857 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1428571429 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.07142857143 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230293213376 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769946606158 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810610785692 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150911979876 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0875677044995 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.