The diagram depicts the stage of producing electricity by hydroelectric power station.
Overall, it is a man made process with several stages starting with rivers water and ended by supply electricity to national grid.it is a shifting procedure that the multiple process run on day or night.
Closer look to the diagram, it starts with river water that stores on high level reservoir. Bottom of the dam,there have an intake that control flows of water.in day, it opens and produce electricity by flow of water. in night intake closes and reverse process started and flow of water work as pumping.
Furthermore,reversible turbines connected to generator and low level reservoir.it operates day or night. in a day water supply to low level reservoir and stock for further use. Day shift it work as pump water into high level reservoir.Passing water through turbines and force of water run the generator that make electricity. The electricity pass through long distance power lines and transported to the national power grid.
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- The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourists facilities.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 56
- Popular hobbies and interests change over time and are more a reflection of trends and fashions than an indication of what individuals really want to do in their spare time.To what extent do you agree with this statement? 56
- The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. 73
- The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... hydroelectric power station. Overall,it is a man made process with several stag...
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...ter that stores on high level reservoir.Bottom of the dam,there have an intake that co...
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...n high level reservoir.Bottom of the dam,there have an intake that control flows of wa...
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...ntake that control flows of water.in day,it opens and produce electricity by flow o...
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...of water work as pumping. Furthermore,reversible turbines connected to generator and low...
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Suggestion: Day
...vel reservoir and stock for further use.Day shift it work as pump water into high l...
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Suggestion: works
... and stock for further use.Day shift it work as pump water into high level reservoir...
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...as pump water into high level reservoir.Passing water through turbines and force of wat...
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...run the generator that make electricity.The electricity pass through long distance ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48101265823 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24337294093 2.65546596893 122% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588607594937 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 22.4926829268 173% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 123.314638223 43.030603864 287% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 216.5 112.824112599 192% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.5 22.9334400587 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0981844085319 0.215688989381 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0981861755647 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0984741573069 0.0843802449381 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981861755647 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0984741573069 0.0819641961636 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.1 13.2329268293 182% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.43 61.2550243902 38% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 10.3012195122 191% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.1 11.4140731707 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.06136585366 125% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.9970731707 160% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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