The diagrams illustrate an island which is renovated and add different types of tourist feature.
it is clear that the island rebuild for their tourist and most stunning feature is pier,reception,accommodation and restaurant. It also noticeable that the natural feature remained same as past.
if we closely look at the first chart,it has only some trees and beach. But after reconstruction of the island it revamped full island. Most significant feature is pier. Without pier,the island can’t communicate with tourist. Boat,launch,steamer can port there. Pier is connected to reception also linked with restaurant using vehicle track. Visitors can easily move from one to another area.
furthermore,accommodation area circled centre of the island. Another accommodation area also build near beach. Every huts connected with footpath. Natural view of the island remained same as past. Footpath linkup with accommodation zone and beach. Beach declared as swimming area and visitors can swim and enjoy fresh natural view.
- The graph shows the average annual expenditure on cell phone and residential phone services 56
- The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourists facilities.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 56
- The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. 73
- Popular hobbies and interests change over time and are more a reflection of trends and fashions than an indication of what individuals really want to do in their spare time.To what extent do you agree with this statement? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: It
...different types of tourist feature. it is clear that the island rebuild for th...
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Suggestion: , reception
...ourist and most stunning feature is pier,reception,accommodation and restaurant. It also n...
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...ural feature remained same as past. if we closely look at the first chart,it h...
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... if we closely look at the first chart,it has only some trees and beach. But afte...
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...ignificant feature is pier. Without pier,the island can't communicate with tour...
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Suggestion: , launch
...an't communicate with tourist. Boat,launch,steamer can port there. Pier is connect...
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...sily move from one to another area. furthermore,accommodation area circled centre of th...
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Suggestion: , accommodation
...rom one to another area. furthermore,accommodation area circled centre of the island. Anot...
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Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
...commodation area also build near beach. Every huts connected with footpath. Natural v...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 880.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71428571429 4.92477711251 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.683621492 2.65546596893 139% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649350649351 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 9.0 22.4926829268 40% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.8874313186 43.030603864 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 55.0 112.824112599 49% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 9.625 22.9334400587 42% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.6875 5.23603664747 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.093459516937 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0323766533497 0.103423049105 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436577619407 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0663508910455 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315443371257 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.88 61.2550243902 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.36 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 11.4329268293 39% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 5.6 10.9970731707 51% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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