Today, youth crime is rife. It seems to be a widespread concern on these days that more crimes are being committed by kids and juveniles in many regions. There are several reasons related to this trend. However, solutions can be taken to mitigate those potential problems. This essay will analyze both causes and solutions for this issue.
There are a number of reasons for this trend. The main cause is the lack of parental guidance. As many parents are busy with their work schedules, they don't have much time for their children. Without parental care and monitoring, teenagers who have low awareness are likely to be affected by bad influences. This is why many of them are engaged in criminal activities such as shoplifting or drug abuse. Another cause for this dilemma is the heavy exposure to violence. Modern technology allow them to get access to the endless websites of various topics, many of which may contain violent videos. Hence, the inappropriate contents may cause youngsters to imitate and develop immorality.
However, there are several actions that could be taken to solve the problem. Firstly, what the government should do is to send the crimes who commit minor offences to reform schools where they are taught about the seriousness of illegal activities. Secondly, stricter punishments should be imposed on people who commit serious crimes such as robbery or violent attacks, such as giving them longer prison sentences. This can prevent them from re-offending after being released. Furthermore, violent contents should be limited to adults who are 18 or older.
In conclusion, the lack of education from families and exposure to violence are responsible for the increase in the number of juvenile crimes. However, diverse measures can be enforced to tackle the problems that are certain to arise.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15824915825 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6072131366 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589225589226 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0874340422 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.85 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232426449611 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564468810017 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392231391302 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118470712005 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416412247448 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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