The environmental problems facing today’s world are so great that there is little ordinary people can to improve the situation. Governments and large companies should be responsible for reducing the amount of damage being done to the environment.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
The pending environmental issue has confronted everyone on the Earth, from governmental bodies to its civilians. In my opinion, this universally matter shall be taken responsible by individual.
Particularly, education plays a key role in the process. people in all levels should receive well-educated regarding the problems of the environment, especially children in their early age like in primary school or kindergarden. early perparation may enhance better consciousness about the natural law and the ecosystem when growing up. For instance, in Japan, children in grade one are taught not to dump garbage in the public, and, as a result, the children’s awareness of environmental issue instils from their infancy to their adulthood. Due to that fact, the community’s realization improves on a great scale.
To continue with, the current situation can hardly change if one cannot curb the damaging action to the ecosystem, despite the effort of the lawmakers and the government. For example, if the government pass down the law prevent the citizen from smoking in the public, it cannot be certain that the people will not find elsewhere to smoke. Therefore, I deem that it depend heavily on the human’s consciousness of the nature to ameliorate the circumstances. However, there is case when government can have influence on the matter. regarding the example of singapore, the lawmakers of this country have promulgated the law that charging everyone who dispose trash at the country. The law seems effective as the streets in singapore are clean.
In conclusion, the problems related to the ecosystem are the globally matter, but it requires the realization of individual who live on this planet to take action in order to change the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, regarding, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34408602151 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15018897847 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598566308244 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6008558188 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.5 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177243942806 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506197917256 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415877273195 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895632388205 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406023320773 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.