Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
cultural tradition is the foremost factor for the unique identification of the certain nation. it is the remnant of the ancient tradition and culture of the various group which where exist sometimes in the past. it brings unique features of the group and people will become arrested to know the different strange element of the particular tradition. As cultural tradition contains the past lifestyle of the group and key identification for the certain tribe, it is very necessary to be preserved. The government has responsibility to preserve and generate these precious gift and approach of ensuring the financial support for major cities to preserve and generate the cultural tradition is must.
To begin, the cultural tradition is the major attraction for the tourist which can generate the large income for the country. The country has its own peculiar and attracting sense of style which can attract eyes of large population. Investing on the sector, multifaceted profit can be achieved and would become profitable if government set the priorities in these field. In instance, the ancient Rome has its own unique past culture and nowadays many people around the world has been attracted through its features. it helps to earn them income and also helps to make their culture alive. thus, the government ensured the enrichment of the substantial source to keep these features alive by maintaining their salubrious condition.
Additionally, lack of the fund can cause economic crisis on the cities which can brings negative consequences on the culture tradition. if there is lack of maintenance cost, the vitality of the different iconic place of the city would not be alive and can be ruined in some extent. On the other hand, the cost of the loss of the precious gift from the forefather is unbearable and cost can never be covered. In instance, the government of Nepal does not provide the necessary fund for the maintenance of the historical monument due to which large number of cultural diversity has been lost in the present situation. thus, the claim has very meaningful claim regarding the preservation of the cultural tradition of the main cities.
In conclusion, governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive and to preserve and generate the cultural tradition. it cannot be denied that the other cities or countryside also bears the cultural tradition and government should give attention there also, however, the importance of the major cities comes first and treats others thereafter.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, regarding, so, thus, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 31.0 12.9106741573 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2156.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 416.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18269230769 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7761665281 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459134615385 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 676.8 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0373435741 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.777777778 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1111111111 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38888888889 5.21951772744 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333305244548 0.243740707755 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108670056216 0.0831039109588 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130164262808 0.0758088955206 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222979568257 0.150359130593 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120098138962 0.0667264976115 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.