Introduce yourself and the purpose you study English
My name is Nguyen Dan Phuong, and I am in the first year in high school. I would be grateful to introduce something about myself, which are my interests, ambitions, and my justification for studying English.
First, I have a taste for reading books, particularly books telling stories about travelling throughout the world . This habit formed when I received my first book as a present from my father on birthday. It was him who cultivated my passion for the world of letters by encouraging me to read a page of a book everyday. Moreover, through those books, I have gradually discovered the various beauty of countries, which inspired me the dream of studying abroad.
I started learning English and considered it as a tool to fulfil my objective to study in a foreign country. It is prominent that English is an international language. Therefore, being fluent in English would offer me more chances to enter the university that I have desired. Furthermore, I devote time to studying English with a view to gaining abundant knowledge from the Internet. In the era of information explosion, there is no doubt that who is capable of taking advantage of online resources will be the winner. On that account, to be successful in studying this language would broaden my knowledge in a diverse range of fields, and thus give me vital skills in readiness for later life.
In conclusion, I am absorbed in English, and I aspire to master this world-wide language in order to assist my study and life in the near future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 5.60731707317 642% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 965.302439024 131% => OK
No of words: 260.0 196.424390244 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87692307692 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8824689583 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 106.607317073 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588461538462 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 283.868780488 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 1.53170731707 653% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1316637404 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5384615385 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161838037897 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639954560478 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611719863853 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106736701845 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510003136424 0.0819641961636 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 40.7170731707 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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