The diagrams below shows the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth
The process illustrates the life cycle of the silkworm and the steps in the manufacturing of the silk for garment industry.
Overall, there are various main stages in the process of producing silk cloth, beginning with the moth to eggs and ending with silk wich is input for clothing field.
First of all, eggs are laied by the moth, they take 10 days for each egg. After that, mulberry leafs are eaten by silkworm larva, they are growth for up to 6 weeks. Then silk threads are made by larva for 3 to 8 days. Consequently, the cocoon is harvested from them and the larva become to the moth after 16 days.
The good cocoon are selected from raw cocoon. Follow this stages, they are moved to water and boiled its. Afterwards, they are unwinded to many thread which are length between 200 and 900 metres of a thread. Next, it is twisted which are transferred to dyeing. The stage finishes that they are weaved and dyed the silk for production of the clothes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 70, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...laied by the moth, it is taken 10 days. after that, mulberry leafs are eaten by silkw...
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Line 7, column 287, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'woven'.
Suggestion: woven
...yeing. The stage finishes that they are weaved and dyed the silk for production of the...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, second, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 777.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51744186047 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35822295848 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552325581395 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 221.4 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8571190326 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.6363636364 112.824112599 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6363636364 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212685586779 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733805745697 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794385250239 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140109519255 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633543344755 0.0819641961636 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.2329268293 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 61.2550243902 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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