You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you.
Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter
advise them of your situation
explain how this is affecting you
request a new card
Dear Mr.Albert,
I am writing to inform you that I lost my <span style="font-size: 19.36px;">identification</span> card yesterday. At the beginning I will introduce my self, My name is Doaa Okaila, I am a third-year dental student. That is why I faced a dilemma when I lot it.
In more details, this considered to be a detrimental issue, which will have a negative effect on me.
In other words, I am not allowed to enter the clinics or get any new patients without it. Also, I can submit my assignments or researches unless I have my own card with me. For example, If I have a clinical section even if my patient is present in the waiting area. I can not proceed or take a cubic in order to assist her situation. And that will affect my score a lot. And one of my demand is to get higher grades.
I would be grateful in you could make a new identification card for me. As soon as possible.
Looking forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely,
Doaa Okaila.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Albert
Dear Mr.Albert, I am writing to inform you that I ...
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Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr.Albert, I am writing to inform you that I lost m...
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Line 6, column 189, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ave my own card with me. For example, If I have a clinical section even if my pat...
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Line 8, column 73, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... make a new identification card for me. As soon as possible. Looking forward t...
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Line 12, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rliest convenience. Yours sincerely, Doaa Okaila.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, third, for example, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 836.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61878453039 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.78220277658 2.54303337028 149% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629834254144 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3744040998 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.7142857143 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9285714286 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206300142262 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613797551915 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600575473436 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110920006765 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450638304002 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.63 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.