It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Since the dawn of humanity, people used to fond of good food as it is the priority to stay alive to date — a restaurant just an option to get it so quickly. Being a citizen of the most corner area of the city I am currently living in, it was an urge of all the people here for a long time to have a restaurant here as there was no restaurant to date. As I believe later is better than never, the announce of building a new restaurant in our neighborhood would be a great decision at all. I feel this way for two reasons. The first justification for that is, it could be an opportunity for the job seeker. Secondly, people here will get the chance to check in with a new taste of food.
To commence with, scarcity of job is one of the most significant problems in this contemporary world. Even to become a good entrepreneur, people need to engage themselves in a situation. It helps them to get the real experience so that they can relate it with their dreams. Sometimes it helps them not to become looser. My uncle's experience is a compelling example of this. My uncle used to dream of being a renowned country entrepreneur. That is why, without giving it a second thought, he started his first business based on DVD renting in a very remote village, where people struggle to get food how could it even became possible for them to show their family films whereas the cost of rent the dvd is similar as the cost of rice. So my uncles were asked by my father had he been employed before starting the shop, he would not have to feel lost here. So the people who would like to do a restaurant business, it would really help them if they get experience from it by working here. Besides some students can arrange their monthly expenses only of them by working here as a part-time.
On top of that, sometimes we feel bored to have the same dish at our home as we take it regularly. So it could be a great alternative to change our taste. People who are always busy with their works will get the chance to spend some time with their family by giving them a treat here. Whereas, the women can try the new recipe at home after taste it from here. So, it will help them to change the home menu for some special occasions. Besides, they can even compare them with it. Even some business proposals could come out from them by getting experience from it.
Last but not least, it really helps the coming owner to understand fully how to communicate with a customer if he had a grudge on them.
Due to the aforementioned ground, I am of the opinion that the announcement of building a new restaurant will be blessed to us. This is because of creating an opportunity of getting experience and extra money and because of overcoming the boringness with the traditional food over new types.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 394, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...s I believe later is better than never, the announce of building a new restaurant in our nei...
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Line 3, column 1077, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[1]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...xpenses only of them by working here as a part-time. On top of that, sometimes we feel b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, whereas, even so, i feel, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 81.0 52.1666666667 155% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2267.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 518.0 407.700716846 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37644787645 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77070365392 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52215847516 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469111969112 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 726.3 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.55995291 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1923076923 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.65384615385 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0890854320623 0.236089414692 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0294721487513 0.076458572812 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349339387307 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.056629164591 0.150856017488 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469751062853 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.002688172 170% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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